Susie,
I would like to recommend a writing site.
It is the best I have found to learn to write better because
'critiquing others work' is the best way to develop ones own writing skill. You are a natural writer and should well... write.
Writers critique each others work on 'writing forums.org'
'not what they say but how they say it'.
It is real weird at first but it will help you be a better writer.
Check it out
http://www.writingforums.org/ Thank you...♪
Jack the Knife
J. Winters von Knife
{The Poet}